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It is written well. The grammar and paragraph structure is well done. Chapters are way too short and makes things stretch out way to much to get done. Main issue is Mc is instantly made out to be a naive idiot. Sells phone for 10million valid and buys equipment before even getting to main city for 9 million. His equipment worth luke 30k valis.. it's very cliche and honestly makes Mc boring and cliche afjust ruins him alot tbh
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Sorry, Instantly becoming smart will ruin his growth. I acknowledge what you tryna say. But, If somebody transmigrates all of a sudden to a fantasy world, what would they do? - 'act smart', moreover, just knowing the anime doesn't mean the things following in real life will be the same. Just like he thought that Dwarves are simple — turned out, they were cunning. This is the setting of the novel — To make the MC grow. Not to ruin him making — Aizen.