Review Detail of TrashyWriter01 in Bartender's Omniversal Conquest

Everything about this story is good, hell it even started off GREAT but it started going downhill after LaLa was introduced, not even downhill really its just the story progression is WAY TOO fast like, after every situation we (the readers) have barely anytime to digest what is happening before we move on to another situation and it’s frustrating honestly. Like for example the Rias situation that took multiple chapters in the LN and a whole season (or atleast half the season) in the anime was done in a couple paragraphs which is extremely underwhelming. And the there was the fact that everything was done unprofessionally seeing as he normally couldn’t just go directly to the underworld attack the Phenex territory just to get Riser’s attention and get off scot free for it. And there was really no build up to it AT ALL. It quite literally just like this MC tells Rias he can solve her Riser problem, she goes to him and tells him that she needs help, he goes to underworld beat riser takes his Peerage and annuals Rias’ marriage and its over. Its like EVERYTHING goes the MC’s way with NO interruption AT ALL and thats what make this story EXTREMELY underwhelming. It had and still has the potential to one of the better DxD fics if you just slow down, like how is it that when the MC showed ATTACKS the Phenex territory no one BUT Riser and his peerage shows up. Like where are the other Phenex’s like his mother or father or older siblings why ONLY riser and his peerage? And how come when the DEVIL KING and the Gremorys and phenex not show up to mention how not only did the MC unprofessionally annaul the contract between Riser and Rias but also take his Peerage that had THIER DAUGHTER ON IT? See what I mean, everything is wayyy to conventional for MC.