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Neon_SsX
Neon_SsXLv1511mth
2024-05-03 06:02

Just binged all the chapters and I would like to say I’m thoroughly impressed. Story is good, pacing is quite fast but still very good. Also there is little to no grammer mistakes. Also the characters are well written and Michael’s(Mc) personality is really likeable. Hope you continue your awesome work author👍👍

Michael and The Four Queens

Sweeps83
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Thanks for the kind words and please feel free to provide feedback and suggestions as this is my first work. [img=recommend]

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Neon_SsXLv15

No worries. And on the top of my head can’t say anything now about feedback as your doing incredible for a first time writing. All I ask is that you update regularly which you are. 👍👍

Sweeps83:Thanks for the kind words and please feel free to provide feedback and suggestions as this is my first work. [img=recommend]
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The story so far is good and your stability of updates is prefect .wish u could update the same way in future and hope u get recognized by webnovel.

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Fantastic, i cant think any wrong with story pacing is great suspense and mystery are great. the only thing ive seen wrong are some minor spelling mistakes and mix ups. otherwise i couldn’t stop reading in till i ran out of chapters.

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