Item: Oshi No Ko: Duet of Destinies
Rating: 5
Author: XaviValentine

XaviValentineAuthor1yr

2024-05-02 00:27

Shameless 5 star review here… It’s my first novel so hopefully you guys enjoy it!

Oshi No Ko: Duet of Destinies

XaviValentine

4.6

28 Chs

Liked by 14 people

Replies9

Juan_Garay_0225Lv4

Why did you delete the previous one?

1yr

XaviValentineAuthor

When I made the book on inkstone it was duplicated on my end so I was trying to fix that and to do it I had to delete the book. It’s 100% fixed now though so we should be fine!

Juan_Garay_0225:Why did you delete the previous one?

1yr

BridgeToHeavensLv4

Autor 🙋‍♂️ are the kids at least his?

1yr

XaviValentineAuthor

Aqua and Ruby? Nah he’s the dad that stepped up

BridgeToHeavens:Autor 🙋‍♂️ are the kids at least his?

1yr

DaoOfCultureLv14

tf is rnb

1yr

XaviValentineAuthor

Rhythm and Blues. Michael Jackson would be considered RnB, so would Stevie Wonder.

DaoOfCulture:tf is rnb

1yr

MrIIIoLv5

I haven't read yet, but I just want to say that when using an AI as an editing tool, be cautious with which edits you keep in the story and which you don't. AI's have a specific writing style that most people recognize after using chatgpt for a while, and it isn't great.

11mth

AKARYUULv14

So not his. So why even bother reading ? Looking after someone kids is a nightmare but rising them is much worse , whose ungrateful little shiits. Nothing good will happen with rising reincarnators as ur own then they are not. So u just made this story more uninteresting, congrats.

XaviValentine:Aqua and Ruby? Nah he’s the dad that stepped up

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DaoistvwUOEgLv1

your history is great!! please continue it until the end

5mth

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