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CasualDegenerate
CasualDegenerateLv46mth
2024-05-09 04:28

It’s fine there is a lot of typo’s and chapters that are entirely bolded also big mistake with the mc knowing the OG story due to the fact that the knowledge would instantly blow up his head and also how did he transmigrate is he similar to the ancient sun god and that he simply fell into a slumber then awoke within the chaos sea (but in a different place for the mc) or did the mc get the cocoon treatment? If so why didn’t he awake from book two since it would be more interesting to have a main character who is part of the transmigators “Curly Haired Baboon Society” Also did you know that the Mythical form of the Lawyer pathway is the Curly Haired Baboon?

Lord of Mysteries: The Stars Return

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daniel_rahn
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My only question is, its there any romance here, cuz I'm sick of good Lord of mysteries fics that doesn't have romance, i don't care if its not the main focus, i just think its unlikely or boring to have a novel without romance, personal opinion of course

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Cloud_Clpid2
Cloud_Clpid2Lv4

The mc has a power similar to the sefirah castle that has to do with rules and it’s described pretty well and not completely overpowered as a cheat. The biggest issue I’ve had with the novel so far is the butchering of names like Xio being called Hugh and Loen Kingdom being called Rune Kingdom

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ThePrinceRadiant
ThePrinceRadiantLv1

Reveal spoiler

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Indiskyz
IndiskyzLv6

I really want to like this but the translator is really trying to make it as difficult as possible. Overall it reads well however it is impossible to ignore the fact that they simply refuse to get the names right. Loen has become Rune and Xio (a woman) has become Hugh. I assume the translator is just using AI to do it but even still they just need to take 2 minutes to go through a chapter looking for names to correct and fixing them. There is also the pathway names and other stuff that needs correcting but comparatively it’s a minor issue compared to just getting the characters names right.

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GrizzWald
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I really like your story but their is one thing that is absolutely killing me. You have misnamed one of the protagonists, you have been calling Xio Derecha, Hugh when that's just not her name.

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Velliolx
VelliolxLv14

a unique story of lord of the mysteries hidden gem fanfic

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CreationGODBlack
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More More More More!! Chapters a lotta Chapters, It's great!;;;;;;!!

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