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Cloud_Clpid2
Cloud_Clpid2Lv46mth
2024-05-10 02:56

The mc has a power similar to the sefirah castle that has to do with rules and it’s described pretty well and not completely overpowered as a cheat. The biggest issue I’ve had with the novel so far is the butchering of names like Xio being called Hugh and Loen Kingdom being called Rune Kingdom

Lord of Mysteries: The Stars Return

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_Omni_King_
_Omni_King_Lv3

I think the actual translation is 'Ruin' which is supposed to be 'Loen' but the translator mistakenly wrote it as 'Rune'.

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erhemee1003
erhemee1003Lv4

I didn't even notice. my mind instantly associates hugh with xio

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FennrrirX
FennrrirXLv5

Because it's the same thing that the above guy said, it is a translation thingy. Chinese characters don't translate fully to English so different translators will get different English words for the same equivalent in Chinese, all of them sounding the same. Hugh and Xio sound the Same depending on the accent; the same is true with Loen and Ruin and Rune and Rue.

erhemee1003:I didn't even notice. my mind instantly associates hugh with xio
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Trafford
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Yeah... the names are constantly changing and it is the most annoying thing about the novel, which is destroying the experience of reading en masse...

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Cloud_Clpid2
Cloud_Clpid2Lv4

Yeah I dropped it like a day after I made this review because of that reason it got too annoying trying to figure out who was speaking or what was being talked about

Trafford:Yeah... the names are constantly changing and it is the most annoying thing about the novel, which is destroying the experience of reading en masse...
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Trafford
TraffordLv6

I am even considering doing the translation by myself... editing one chapter is around 10 minutes if you take already translated ones from the WTR Lab and then edit it with Grammarly and adjust some sentences and other things...

Cloud_Clpid2:Yeah I dropped it like a day after I made this review because of that reason it got too annoying trying to figure out who was speaking or what was being talked about
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daniel_rahn
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My only question is, its there any romance here, cuz I'm sick of good Lord of mysteries fics that doesn't have romance, i don't care if its not the main focus, i just think its unlikely or boring to have a novel without romance, personal opinion of course

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I really want to like this but the translator is really trying to make it as difficult as possible. Overall it reads well however it is impossible to ignore the fact that they simply refuse to get the names right. Loen has become Rune and Xio (a woman) has become Hugh. I assume the translator is just using AI to do it but even still they just need to take 2 minutes to go through a chapter looking for names to correct and fixing them. There is also the pathway names and other stuff that needs correcting but comparatively it’s a minor issue compared to just getting the characters names right.

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I really like your story but their is one thing that is absolutely killing me. You have misnamed one of the protagonists, you have been calling Xio Derecha, Hugh when that's just not her name.

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