Review Detail of Daoistv8arJD in HP: Harry Had Enough

The idea behind the story Is good, the oc is awful and so is the friendship with Cedric. Overall it needs to be taken back and rewritten to better showcase each scene as the author is a decent writer but feels rushed/unplanned. The story needs to be rethought because so much has happened in no time at alll. Get rid of your oc and Cedric thing bc it just doesn’t I’m sorry