Theguard

Just missing key plot twists and his dialogue needs a lot of work.

Yeah that’s not happening

Another one! Excellent, use of environment and simple tactics

Can’t wait for the combat

One of the best fanfics I have ever read. Extremely well written, the plot is a satisfying mixture of adventure and kingdom building with reasonable strategy. I hope the author continues this fic all the way through for it would be a loss for it to end.

There is a lot of quality to this story but the plot and direct has become lost. I kept reading in hopes of improvement but now I’m dropping.

This only works if the house is currently under the fidelius charm, after Voldemort attacked the charm broke and the address would return to any who knew it.

This fic has been stolen

Ashwinders only live for an hour

The author start out very well, but it turns into just character bashing, the writing and story line becomes dry and boring the farther the story goes. Grammar is excellent but the style and lack of interesting interactions and adventures brings the value down greatly