Review Detail of TheDaoOfSleep in Extra's Descent
Review detail
it's just average in my opinion cause there's nothing new here . The novel is about a teenage boy who used to read a novel but dropped it and died when he wanted to pick it up again and got transmigrated into an Extra's body ( Brandon )in the novel who might not actually be an Extra because he thinks the system he has was for the other Brandon The Extra's are pretty fleshed out which is really good . The system is a meh at best it has the ability to create any skill . The MC Brandon well he's not too smart I can't really blame him cause he was still a teenager when he got transmigrated but still a little bit of common sense is still needed which he doesn't seem to have The plot is not really good here's why -The MC wanted to steal a mask from the academy which is supposed to be the most prestigious and safest academy in the world but somehow his subordinate whom he asked to sneak into the academy when there was a party for the arrival of the new students and act as a waiter oh and you would think there would be security to stop him but no he somehow managed to sneak into the party in the academy with no prep time at all like the MC told him at the last minute . So he somehow managed to sneak into the academy blah blah blah started scouting the place where the mask is supposed to be looking for the security camera location and all that. Then the MC and him started sneaking into the place where the oh so great mask is supposed to be and again you would think for a valuable mask in a prestigious academy they would put more security but nope only two guards at the entrance of the place where the mask is supposed to be and MC great subordinate managed to distract them buy saying he wanted to use the toilet or whatever and the stupid guards followed him to take him to the toilet both of them for Christ sake so the MC was able to enter the place with ease . Honestly I get the author new that's why I'm stopping here and not saying more oh and the author is thinking of making a poll to make the his BLOOD RELATED SISTER his Love interest which in my opinion shouldn't even be considered at all . still gonna read it but once the poll is up and i see his sister name I'm out (Excuse my English )
Extra's Descent
athex
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Appreciate the feedback. Don't worry, the sister thing is just a gag with my friends since they all like the sister. I wanted to write the starting chapters to be comedic and such. But eventually shifted the tone into something serious, and that's a fault on my part. Though, I appreciate the time and effort you gave to type all that. Thank you once again!
athex:Appreciate the feedback. Don't worry, the sister thing is just a gag with my friends since they all like the sister. I wanted to write the starting chapters to be comedic and such. But eventually shifted the tone into something serious, and that's a fault on my part. Though, I appreciate the time and effort you gave to type all that. Thank you once again!
athex:Appreciate the feedback. Don't worry, the sister thing is just a gag with my friends since they all like the sister. I wanted to write the starting chapters to be comedic and such. But eventually shifted the tone into something serious, and that's a fault on my part. Though, I appreciate the time and effort you gave to type all that. Thank you once again!
Just to be clear, the MC's subordinate thing you mentioned gets cleared up later on. Just read further. It gets way better. Although I too was bothered by the subordinate going to the toilet and all that part, it will make more sense at like chapter 50s. It is where the novel really starts tbh. The arcs that come after are all peak.