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Glebby_BoiLv45mth
2024-11-19 08:15

Ok, the story is decent and the interactions and relationship-development between the characters is refreshing compared to other DxD ffs. The novel is definitely worth a read. HOWEVER, the writing quality needs editing. And I’m not talking about some small mistakes. You can see the author putting some work into the novel, and that’s commendable. But the sentence structure, some missing words (not often,but it’s there), general grammar and wording of some parts leaves some room for improvement. It’s a bit dicey to read (not so bad compared to certain ffs), definitely better as an audio-book (the writing is definitely more pleasant to the ear rather than visually). Overall, a decent read.

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