I just read chapter 50, I think at this point I can do a basic and shallow review of the story. To begin with, I would like to talk about the development of the story so far and it is very good, the author explores Whitebeard's abilities and powers a lot, in addition to the development of the characters, especially Jason's partners, and I like how things are slow and rhythmic, and positive points for Jason's behavior, he has a lot of charisma lol. Of course, I think the story needs editing. From what I've read, there are a lot of misspelled words and no context, making it difficult to understand the story itself, but nothing that would make you give up because of that, and I hope that in the chapters ahead and in the next releases it will be better written. So it's a 5 star.
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