1.- It seems to be written at the same time that you are watching an episode of Rick and Morty, everything goes very fast and there is little general information about the place or environment. 2.- in chapter 3 it seems to be in the third person but it is being written in the first person, which is disconcerting, is the boy omnipresent? Or is it you, I don't know. 3.-This is more personal, I don't know how old the author is, but the Smith family and especially Rick are not good people, they are all defective in themselves, Rick is infinitely intelligent but that does not make him an idolizable character, nor does Beth , Jerry is normal, not an idiot, he is normal in my opinion, an average American. The story has its flaws but is readable within the standard.
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In principle, it's not bad, but when the "harem, catch them all" begins, the interest just dies, it's especially terrible to read a chapter from chat gpt, too much drama, it's just terrible, I myself don't know how to write fan fiction and I understand that it's not so easy to do, but it's still a pity that there are no and probably won't be normal fan fiction in our lifetime, It's too difficult to write about this, there are still more fan fiction about Rick and Morty than about Doctor Who
Understand Point 1. and 2. but Point 3. is BS over 9000. MC doesn't idolize Rick. He even says Rick is fxcked up and doesn't get over his past like a bxtch. He admires Rick smart mind and ass-kisses him so he doesn't get suspicious of MC but never idolized his actions. Jerry isn't normal he is legit a pathetic Idiot. He played a balloon popping game that was created for toddlers, reptiles, and other animals. He is fooled by an extremely Low-Quality life simulation where nobody said more than 3 sentences, and everybody either isn't moving or glitching around. He can't accept that Pluto isn't a planet and becomes a pawn for the Plutonians. He created an ad for apples labelled 'Just Apples'. In Jerry Daycare, he was tricked by the Beth Doll. He waits a whole day for Rick just to ask him, "Do you have some kind of hand shaped device that can open this jar?"ย to open a Jar.
agreed that guy was really making me confused since im reading reviews before deciding to add this novel in my list, by the way can you tell me if i should give this thing a read or just give it up cause alot of peopl are saying its trash.
ChaosKami:Understand Point 1. and 2. but Point 3. is BS over 9000. MC doesn't idolize Rick. He even says Rick is fxcked up and doesn't get over his past like a bxtch. He admires Rick smart mind and ass-kisses him so he doesn't get suspicious of MC but never idolized his actions. Jerry isn't normal he is legit a pathetic Idiot. He played a balloon popping game that was created for toddlers, reptiles, and other animals. He is fooled by an extremely Low-Quality life simulation where nobody said more than 3 sentences, and everybody either isn't moving or glitching around. He can't accept that Pluto isn't a planet and becomes a pawn for the Plutonians. He created an ad for apples labelled 'Just Apples'. In Jerry Daycare, he was tricked by the Beth Doll. He waits a whole day for Rick just to ask him, "Do you have some kind of hand shaped device that can open this jar?"ย to open a Jar.
But then again, I'm only at chapter 34 because i can't continuously read heavy Smut based work because it gets boring.
Ireallylikereading:agreed that guy was really making me confused since im reading reviews before deciding to add this novel in my list, by the way can you tell me if i should give this thing a read or just give it up cause alot of peopl are saying its trash.
hmm yeah your right, i read novels for the plot not the p?rn so i understand how this question can be a bit difficult, well just give me a yes or no after scaling them then, if you mostly agres say yes if not say no.
ChaosKami:But then again, I'm only at chapter 34 because i can't continuously read heavy Smut based work because it gets boring.
Well, if you're reading only for the plot, I wouldn't recommend it.
Ireallylikereading:hmm yeah your right, i read novels for the plot not the p?rn so i understand how this question can be a bit difficult, well just give me a yes or no after scaling them then, if you mostly agres say yes if not say no.
