the story itself seem pretty awesome , but the gramma and writing is really funky and outright funny sometimes like hagrid was about to pay for a trip on the knight buss , and the one taking the money said something like !hey it cost 8 sickels but we take 9 hot chocolade" wut? :'D

I do it because it seems like everyone does it and it's become a tradition. I hope you will support me with constructive criticism. I would like to remind you once again that my native language is not English. If you can be understanding and warn me about spelling mistakes, I will try to correct them.

The Story is really good so far but with the inclusion of Marvel in this I am probably gonna drop it

i will give you 5 stars just for the title finaly something new , and the op hagrid fics are so rare to find .................................................

The story is quite good, and I find it interesting . The only downside is that the grammar is a bit off, but it does not take anything away from the story, and it is a very interesting story with a great concept, so please carry on the good work.

The writing mistakes ruin it for me, the rest is good tho, the author should probably edit the first chapters unless he wants more people to give up on the novel, like i did

Love the fic

Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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