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2024-05-03 05:07

the story itself seem pretty awesome , but the gramma and writing is really funky and outright funny sometimes like hagrid was about to pay for a trip on the knight buss , and the one taking the money said something like !hey it cost 8 sickels but we take 9 hot chocolade" wut? :'D

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English is not my first language and I think sometimes I don't express myself properly. I will be more careful from now on. Thank you for your criticism.

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