The writing is good and stuff but I just don’t like the premise of the story. Why make him an uchiha if he doesn’t use sharingan and ninjutsu? Why give him some weird system that gives him titles? Why start the story somewhere in the middle? Idk but it has too many things that aren’t to my liking, others may find the unique way it’s set up interesting tho since it’s somewhat unconventional and new.

It's a good novel, I read it and I would like to continue but unfortunately I won't... the reason? I've read so much Naruto fiction that I'm sick of it 🤢 (yes, that's the only reason I don't continue) who knows, maybe I'll come back in a year 👍

I loved this story Especially the romance b/t Fuma and Tsunade. The story, plot, background, and character-building are outstanding.............................

well it's great but since is 1 chapter you can't tell . based on chapter 1 it's Soo freaking good.. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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A very nice FF, but... Author, create Tsunade and Fuma's romance! Please!!! Everything else is very good![img=gift]

A really good fanfiction on the naruto series, having a different concept. A really good read. I just hope the update speed could be increased and we get more chapters fast.

loving it so far, great characters and world building. cannot wait for new chapters[img=recommend] jhvkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Good Naruto Fan-Fic. Mc is in the same generation as Jiraiya and the others, and it's really interesting to see how the relationships are. Can't wait for more.

Really good story with no grammatical mistakes ,consistent quality in the chapters and good pacing ,keep up the good work author-san .xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx