Review Detail of Sara_Weber_9938 in I MADE A DEAL WITH A GANGSTER

Very addictive to read. It keeps you on the edge of wanting to know what will happen next. So far, the development of the story is coming out nicely, and the background is done well. Each character is developed as an individual. Right away, the Fl is showing her strength, yet her fear is nicely blended into her reactions, which keeps her seen as a likable character. She's a perfect blend of not-to-strong or weak, which will hopefully give the readers time to see her growth.