Review Detail of systemwriterK in Why are the Talismans I Drawn Banned Again?!

too much water i read all avaible chapter paid and only two talisman ? too much character it goes everywhere it started good but you have to ruin it i m sad really. an because there s so much people i can t remember who is who name are so similar etc there s no 'characteristics' to the people no depth just a name an identity and that s it, and explaination for a small things goes for an entire chapter, one taliman 50 chap ? bro it s not a dissertation but a book, good idea but lame, anyone can write that way just nonsense onto nonsense, and everything is too perfect no challenge for mc really. oh i want that oh it s there. just use your life as a template or how can people relate ? keep going i hope for your sucess bye