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Ashkelon
AshkelonLv139mth
2024-07-05 23:23

Despite the ML being a hypocritical, manipulative, lying, cheater; the story is entertaining in the beginning. But the redundancy of him seducing countless older woman gets boring. Also, this is a harem story; yet, the spice level is low.

Reborn: Instead of Chasing the School Beauty, I Chased Her Mother

Li Zhi Man
3.7
1063 Chs

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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

Kinda wondering if it is all simple hand holding and leg touching. It begins to grow rather old these fleeting seduction techniques with no result with the work he put in. Personally I would like to see him at the very least score with some of them and move the story along cause as it stands now it is just stringing readers along on a faint hope.

9mth
6
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

not happen ccp banned s x scenes novels and webnovels somewhere between 2010-2020 along with other things like ban on po n industry etc

7mth
2
TheLazyDreamer
TheLazyDreamerLv4

Those f*king mongrels yet they have mistress keeping culture in their circles. This novel has become repetitive in story.

Sin_of_GREED:not happen ccp banned s x scenes novels and webnovels somewhere between 2010-2020 along with other things like ban on po n industry etc
6mth
4
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Dantes_inferno
Dantes_infernoLv15

Hello, is this going to be a r18 harem or a mesh of flirting the entire novel?

10mth

shinu316
shinu316Lv14

story was so good, but lately, u have been royally fkn up. im paying for repeat chapters and missing content. wtf really come on, don't u even care anymore? u used to at least respond to some readers, but now I feel u are ignoring us and don't care that we are paying for this crap and maybe u even doing it on purpose to get us to pay more I'm srry I was a really big fan to this novel but it's going to shit now srry if I sound like an as. s but whatever

2mth
damian_taminua
damian_taminuaLv14

Interesting premise and a promising start to the story. Mc is interesting and I see some potential for his character evolution. Translation quality leaves room for improvement and certain expressions or phrases should be explained if mentioned repeatedly.

10mth
KazeRyuNewbie
KazeRyuNewbieLv14

It's a great story, problem lies in the last few chapters, there is missing content or repeated content. Hope it gets fixed.

2mth
Martian_Dust
Martian_DustLv13

The book overall is really good. I like how the MC interacts with the aunties, not too raunchy butnot too innocent either. I do want to know, however, if this story is leaning towards the harem side or monogamy.

10mth
Ryuuzumaki_Wolf
Ryuuzumaki_WolfLv4

there are translation mistakes and the characters are a bit 2d but nonetheless makes for an entertaining read, I just wish there would be a beta reader or checker for these. loving how the system give the mc reasons too gain the money and not just send to his bank out of nowhere, this way even if the system is gone one day, his connections will still be real

10mth
Akira_Sakurai
Akira_SakuraiLv15

I really liked this novel but the last 100 chapters or so is becoming a joke. The amount of repeat content (ENTIRE CHAPTERS) and missing content are becoming more and more. I've literally paid for about 12 repeat chapters out of around 30-40 chapters. This is not the first complaint in recent months and nothing is getting fixed. WebNovel needs to do something about this asap...

1mth
whimsical_clown
whimsical_clownLv12

hahaha the translation sucks the story was good but , damn , W translation it's crazy'

1mth
Blazzing18
Blazzing18Lv15

ai just got to chapter 30 and this book is really good so far but honestly there is no friends that would give money like that.... and the MCs friend did this for him in his past life not this one and hes asking his friend to go after revenge for himself more then the MC and Y the hell is the MC even trying to seriously go out with these older women when he wants to go back/be with the girl from college that he found loved him and stayed by him!! Honestly what the MC is doing right now is fine because hes only really going after 1 but if he goes after more then 1 then its messed up and then if he still goes after any of them when college starts and tries to go out with her while going after all of these other women then its not fair to the girl. from the past and even the one in college and even to the other women... honestly it is messed up as of now anyways because he is still in love or wants to be with the girl from college but hasnt meet her yet in this life and I can understand wanting to be with someone to avoid thinking about her and all that till the time comes but its still messed up to love someone and still go be with someone else!!!!!

9mth
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