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Raine_eniaRLv153mth
2024-08-02 10:19

the story has potential but the story progress is so slow. when a story progresses this slowly, it makes you lose interest in reading it. Now I'm thinking of dropping this novel, cause it's a waste of money.

Sleeping With The CEO

cai_hong
4.2
369 Chs

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biblio1011
biblio1011Lv15

So, to get the criticism out of the way, I don't know that alternating between the ML and FL point's of view every other chapter was the best idea. I've been skipping the first few paragraphs of each chapter because a lot of rambling information is thrown at you that really interrupts the flow of the story. In some instances, there's such a huge tangent that it almost feels like the author wrote the introduction to a new book! An editor would be a huge help I think. But, the characters are definitely unique and well-written. The world they're in is a bit small, in order to keep the story centered around these two poor individuals who can't sleep and think about little else. It's definitely a bit of a slow-burn, I'm about 25% in, and neither character has shown any romantic interest in the other. I can't wait until Derek gets a reality check once he falls for Emily, living her simple life! Overall, a cute, lighthearted, easy read, without a lot of drama or misunderstandings (at least so far). Absolutely worth a look!

4mth

lakeslate
lakeslateLv15

I want to brag on our dear author!! Great story, great story line, great world view!!! This is a slow burn, but you wIll get so involved in each character that you’ll want more everyday🥰🥰🥰🥰 And just took how great this story rates! Grest job 💙💙💙🥰🥰💙💙

3mth
DaoistaMmS2L
DaoistaMmS2LLv14

Great story, cute slow burn romance that I hope ends in them living happily ever after. The ML and FL are easy to like and are well developed characters. There is some chapter repeats but they are in the POV of a different character. Many chapters end leaving you wanting to read the next chapter. Ahhh the release times are torture!! But the author sometimes take pity on us and releases early. 💕 MCs balance each other well and work through issues well. Novel has a good balance between humor, seriousness, cute moments and OH No!! You can’t help but get invested in the development of the relationship. Keep up the great work Cai_Hong. Looking forward to reading to the end.

3mth
Pink_Limeta
Pink_LimetaLv14

Reveal spoiler

3mth
Ottuh_Tracy
Ottuh_TracyLv4

The story is talking too much time to form properly I’m tried of the endless cycle they are not moving forward at chapter 126.

4mth
books_n_coffee
books_n_coffeeLv4

well ... this is a brilliant story and well written. it's funny and tender and passionate. it is also highly frustrating. it us probably the most "wordy" novel I have ever read. switching POV backwards and forwards from one character to the other, repeating each scene twice gets tiring, the amount of detail in the thought process of every tiny move (times two) and the stupidity of the major misunderstanding which is glossed over to focus on the mind games is seriously irritating. however I got to read the story for free so after the first 70 chaps or so I skimmed. dear author I highly commend your idea and writing ability - if you could find a way to make someone who pays for chapters feel a little less cheated I think you would have greater success. I will definitely look out for other works of yours though.

6d
Andrea_Samuels
Andrea_SamuelsLv13

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The storyline was a departure from what seems to be the usual templates.

1mth
Nichole4917
Nichole4917Lv13

Great story and I love how you arranged the plot lines 😀

1mth
qwertyanu
qwertyanuLv14

loved it...no long side stories, no new character entry, just pure story

1mth
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