This would be the best potential book I have read. Written in an easy to read, engaging style. The story flows well, and the descriptions are vivid enough to paint a clear picture without being too wordy. There are a few spots where the grammar and phrasing could use a little polish, but overall, it's a smooth read that keeps you turning the pages.

The overall story is fantastic, and I'm really loving the direction it's heading! Keep up the great work!

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I read chapter 1. It caught my attention since some emotional cues can lead to misunderstanding and potentially ruin friendship. I'll read the rest of the chapter later. But it's a wholesome story. A masterpiece.

Author can you please tell if it is harem or single fl...hope it's single fl

this has to be one of the most engaging novels I have read until know i am at 5 chapter although it is still progressing but still the way it's written is truly admirable.

It's a slow burn on an interesting premise, the language needs some of work in grammar and syntax - there's confusing transitions between 1st and 3rd pov - but the characters have charm and the plot has a nice flow, quite anime-like.

Great story, it moves at a slow pace, but it kind of make sense. I love the way you portray your characters, and the plot is very intriguing! Wonderful web novel!

This is a Good story for what I have read. The story does move along at a slow pace which is not necessarily bad. The characters were introduced in a way that you would be able to get a picture of who they were and they had some good dynamics. This is the strong point. But I do need to address some of the Grammar as there is some I have to note. First of all, when you are writing for the dialogue you should stick to a tense for the characters. It can get confusing if you say ' Here is what happened, I went to the front and then I would slap them'(Just an example). It does not sound right so I do believe that this is an area which needs improvement as it can be seen many times. There are others that could be stylized better to incorporate a better Dialogue narrative as with some improvements, the dialogue could be amazing. Overall though, the Story dominates as it holds up the interest in the chapters and if you are willing to look past the mistakes you still have a story which can draw you in with well -rounded characters and nice world.