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2024-06-21 00:02

it's a pretty good story but it does have some annoying parts like the fact that the MC has a massive Mansion two AI and a entire laboratory and manufacturing room yet he barely uses them. He also barely tries to prevent villains from becoming villains through stopping their accidents. Like whenever the villains escape into the sewers instead of using his resources to make a whole bunch of drones or robots to scour the sewers controlled by his AI he just decided to sit there and wait for the villains to come back. For example he gets told by Peter that him and Dr Connors are about to finish the lizard serum he now knows the Lizard is about to be born, but all he does is give Peter a slight warning about mutations instead of sending a drone to watch Dr Connors to ensure that he doesn't inject himself. So of course the Lizard is born and a whole bunch of people die and then when the Lizard retreats into the sewers he just sits there and lets him do whatever in the sewers instead of trying to find anyway to scout for him. He just has so much incredible technology that could trivialize stopping villains but he just lets it sit there gathering dust, it feels like such a waste.

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