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ScrambledEgg
ScrambledEggLv38mth
2024-06-24 23:46

The start of the story is pretty good, but after that everything goes downhill, especially after he fought Logan and faced The Lizard. He knew about marvel and the plot, even tho this world is AU several things is the same as MCU, but instead of preventing some accidents to happen, MC act like he forgot about all the plot. So the story become boring because mc act passively even tho he knew about the plot. He act like he is a great hero, he gives some advice to Gwen when she doing the vigilante for the attention that she get, but in the end he just a pathetic mc that act high and mighty. Looking down on the villain and never get serious with his fight. He have all rider form, he is really powerful but he chose to use the weaker form, even when his friend almost dead he only able to scream 'Nooo' even tho he can beat his opponent easily. This is a good concept, even pretty good at the beginning. But mc need to act more serious. Maybe author wants mc and other to have some charater development but making mc look pathetic isn't a good choice. His fight against Abomination is good, but his fight against Logan, Vermin and Lizard is disappointing

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Diggo_Fake
Diggo_FakeLv1

And that fight against Natasha? I don't believe this serum excuse. How could she cause problems for a Kamen Rider?

Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

Bad plot

Diggo_Fake:And that fight against Natasha? I don't believe this serum excuse. How could she cause problems for a Kamen Rider?
MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

so his KR form is weaker than Black Widow?

Diggo_Fake:And that fight against Natasha? I don't believe this serum excuse. How could she cause problems for a Kamen Rider?
Diggo_Fake
Diggo_FakeLv1

Yes, and it is worth mentioning that the author himself said that without transformation he has 30 tons of strength. For some reason, the script decided he would have a hard time with Natasha.

MorningWood_Dao:so his KR form is weaker than Black Widow?
Immortal_Panda
Immortal_PandaLv14

Did spiderman became a kamen rider?

ScrambledEgg
ScrambledEggLv3

it's been a while since i read this story, but i remember he gives peter and gwen some modified henshin prop, i think he gives peter Spider Vistamp from KR Revice

Immortal_Panda:Did spiderman became a kamen rider?
Immortal_Panda
Immortal_PandaLv14

Thanks

ScrambledEgg:it's been a while since i read this story, but i remember he gives peter and gwen some modified henshin prop, i think he gives peter Spider Vistamp from KR Revice
ChaosFeedz
ChaosFeedzLv3

all i gotta say to this is

Diggo_Fake:Yes, and it is worth mentioning that the author himself said that without transformation he has 30 tons of strength. For some reason, the script decided he would have a hard time with Natasha.
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