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1emanresU
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2024-05-21 08:40

The writing quality makes this physically painful to read, I think the author would have more success if he posted this in his native language.

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L0rds2278
L0rds2278Author

Definitely. But it gets better later as I use grammarly and other stuff. So just bear with me for the first 4 chapters

1emanresU
1emanresULv1

I'll try a few more chapters.

L0rds2278:Definitely. But it gets better later as I use grammarly and other stuff. So just bear with me for the first 4 chapters
Shockingly_Decent
Shockingly_DecentLv4

This is a bit over the top, with saying its this hard to read. Its sounds to me like your deformed brain suffering of grammar pedantry syndrome, can't do a little typoglycemia. Stop complaining, and let use enjoy this story.

Poison_Contractor
Poison_ContractorLv1

Don't bother with this guy, if this is horrible to read then its because he's dyslexic or something because the writing is good

1emanresU
1emanresULv1

I find it difficult to read because I have standards and self respect and by 'difficult' I don't mean I can't read, I mean that I find it difficult to find the motivation to force my way through this slop.

Poison_Contractor:Don't bother with this guy, if this is horrible to read then its because he's dyslexic or something because the writing is good
Poison_Contractor
Poison_ContractorLv1

If this is what you call slop, then you have never read something bad, because this is barely noticeable that the grammar and other things are incorrect, and the story grows better if you give it time. And this is from someone that has read lightnovels for at least 8 hours everyday for the last 7 years. And ive read things that are barely readable, where you guess every other sentence what they are even talking about. To storys where they are so perfectly written that the story almost become addicting. And this story is written good, so stop complaining

1emanresU:I find it difficult to read because I have standards and self respect and by 'difficult' I don't mean I can't read, I mean that I find it difficult to find the motivation to force my way through this slop.
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