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Nine_dragons09
Nine_dragons09Lv136mth
2024-06-24 10:18

The novel is really good but the only issue i have is that the author tends to "rant" a lot, especially in the world explanation and in filler chapters. It kinda kills the already built-up momentum like in the train ride where the MC and the officers just yap continuously for like 3-4 chapters. it might seem like you're giving details and more depth in the novel but it's more like embellishing unimportant parts of the novel. Overall i love the novel and it really has potential. These are just my takes😊

INFINITE MONEY - I Will Buy Everything

Darpan_Biswas
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367 Chs

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Darpan_Biswas
Darpan_BiswasAuthor

thank you for your honest review and i will try to lower the explanation

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The first 20-30 chapters are ok but it starts eating away on your brain cells any later. The author probably has ADHD. Going off topic too add 3 unnecessary paragraphs to every paragraph. One single arc took about 30 chapters starting from chapter 20 and as i see it from the titles, it is gonna go on for a lot more. The writing style is annoying. Info dumps every now and then. It would be more practical to introduce new things when they are actually needed. Forinters or whatever were not needed here right now so it was pointless. The Academy introduction was pointless unless he went there or met someone from there. The plot is forced with the mother, the system shutting down and that Mary Woman in train station (you cant just kill a guy holding Royalty ID just cuz u suspect him, run a dna test, check account balance and confirm of he deserves to be royalty before fkin around). Anyway this was my review. This book got potential. Edit and change. Thats how it works. Imma drop it. Do let me know if it changes. Ill give it a read then. Thanks

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Well it's my book so I am going to Five Star it😁

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