Honestly couldn't get passed the first chapter so I only deducted from areas that ruined it for me. The gamer mind passive skills affect personality to a crazy degree, which is excused because you're told in the synopsis he has the gamer system, but this fanfic goes above and beyond and basically warps who he is to fit the stories agenda, making him cold, calculated, and lustful. no character growth. just artifical manufactured personality change. nothing natural or creative just forced change from the getgo. hes going to be the exact same person from beginning to end and the only difference will be his power levels. Thats more than enough to know this story is just mediocre at best. same reason every overlord fanfic sucks. once you've read one like it, you've read em all.
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