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Billy_Joul
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I hope he doesn’t give Helen Parr a stealth abortion this time

Mark of the Multiversal Pretender

SlimeSage

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Seltsam84
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Last story the unborn baby was important for the plot.

Brutality:What do you mean "this time"? Elaborate!
Gato_Bolado
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What? what are you talking about?

Brutality
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What do you mean "this time"? Elaborate!

Dao_of_laziness420
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wait what? Please Elaborate?!?!

Billy_Joul
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Yeah, in the original fic this one is based on/a remake of, despite it being a “template” system and getting new templates each world, instead of getting the new template in incredibles world to gain power (for some reason?) the author decided he had to (re?)-absorb fetal jackjack when elastigirl wasn’t paying attention via a stealth abortion. I don’t think this would be considered a spoiler for this fic? Because it’s a pretty nonsensical plot point in the original that will (hopefully) get patched with literally ANYTHING else. Especially after he became friends with Mr incredible, like bruh that’s like breaking the bro code x1,000,000, even if jackjack was “part of him” originally, MC still thanos snapped his friend’s third child….

Dao_of_laziness420:wait what? Please Elaborate?!?!
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SlimeSage
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Nice to see someone who read that abomination…

Billy_Joul:Yeah, in the original fic this one is based on/a remake of, despite it being a “template” system and getting new templates each world, instead of getting the new template in incredibles world to gain power (for some reason?) the author decided he had to (re?)-absorb fetal jackjack when elastigirl wasn’t paying attention via a stealth abortion. I don’t think this would be considered a spoiler for this fic? Because it’s a pretty nonsensical plot point in the original that will (hopefully) get patched with literally ANYTHING else. Especially after he became friends with Mr incredible, like bruh that’s like breaking the bro code x1,000,000, even if jackjack was “part of him” originally, MC still thanos snapped his friend’s third child….
DaoistIaCYeN
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Yo lo lei..... me dejo un poco sin palavras el como termino fue........ Raro? ¿Algo mas que raro? Lo sibeto pero no se me ocurre otra palabra para describirlo

SlimeSage:Nice to see someone who read that abomination…
Haqinomi
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I read that to. I can't imagine lucifer with the face of jin lazama

SlimeSage:Nice to see someone who read that abomination…
Jrar
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ok im interested

Billy_Joul:Yeah, in the original fic this one is based on/a remake of, despite it being a “template” system and getting new templates each world, instead of getting the new template in incredibles world to gain power (for some reason?) the author decided he had to (re?)-absorb fetal jackjack when elastigirl wasn’t paying attention via a stealth abortion. I don’t think this would be considered a spoiler for this fic? Because it’s a pretty nonsensical plot point in the original that will (hopefully) get patched with literally ANYTHING else. Especially after he became friends with Mr incredible, like bruh that’s like breaking the bro code x1,000,000, even if jackjack was “part of him” originally, MC still thanos snapped his friend’s third child….