Review Detail of N1gga in The Big Bang Assassin (The Big Bang Theory)

Okay! this my review after reading the first five chapters. Its a good premise, but the writing is pretty bad. Pretty sure author is using ai to fix some mistakes but he should really use grammarly as well. the names get confusing as well, you use little and big george for the two George's but you should use georgie or george jr,also you call memaw as connie which is a little less annoying to read than little and big george but is still annoying nonetheless. The story has potential, you just need to work on writing.