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jnjones73
jnjones73Lv157mth
2024-08-09 00:00

The potential is sky high.... but way too many different POV... and each one has different cultures and names. At the point where I stopped I have no idea who POV I wad reading from or why. the story is good and if you pull back on trying to show the story from so many views you would have something that would be amazing. but right now... im confused.

Level Up: Voidwalker

NegansPalace
4.5
324 Chs

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NegansPalace
NegansPalaceAuthor

Most of the POVs have converged into the main storyline. And the POVs were there to show the other prominent characters in the novel. After the first batch, there isn't anymore, and the main focus is Atlas.

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jnjones73
jnjones73Lv15

hmm I'd say add a author note in around chapter 25-30. if it was there I would have kept reading knowing it was going to end soon. but ill return and read more now that I know.

NegansPalace:Most of the POVs have converged into the main storyline. And the POVs were there to show the other prominent characters in the novel. After the first batch, there isn't anymore, and the main focus is Atlas.
7mth
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NegansPalace
NegansPalaceAuthor

Added the note. The story sticks with Atlas past 40+, apart from a few chapters that show what his party members are doing.

jnjones73:hmm I'd say add a author note in around chapter 25-30. if it was there I would have kept reading knowing it was going to end soon. but ill return and read more now that I know.
7mth
Cultured_Daoist
Cultured_DaoistLv14

Oh no, thats not good at all. The only pov acceptable is the mc and the mc only. Period.

4mth
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NegansPalace
NegansPalaceAuthor

Then don't read it; not hard, dude.

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DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

Weirdos being weird again I see

Cultured_Daoist:Oh no, thats not good at all. The only pov acceptable is the mc and the mc only. Period.
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Sea_Of_Deads
Sea_Of_DeadsLv12

author can you tell me how large his harem will be???

NegansPalace:Then don't read it; not hard, dude.
3mth
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NegansPalace
NegansPalaceAuthor

7

Sea_Of_Deads:author can you tell me how large his harem will be???
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Cursed_Oni
Cursed_OniLv4

l prefer it in between 5 but 7 is good

NegansPalace:7
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