The potential is sky high.... but way too many different POV... and each one has different cultures and names. At the point where I stopped I have no idea who POV I wad reading from or why. the story is good and if you pull back on trying to show the story from so many views you would have something that would be amazing. but right now... im confused.
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LIKEhmm I'd say add a author note in around chapter 25-30. if it was there I would have kept reading knowing it was going to end soon. but ill return and read more now that I know.
Added the note. The story sticks with Atlas past 40+, apart from a few chapters that show what his party members are doing.