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MadFool
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Plot seems interesting so far, grammar is decent and not much can be said about the baby MC for now. Atleast he doesn’t seem to be an edgelord so that is a plus. But what does bug me is the constant shift in POV’s that happens 3-5 times in a chapter. This wouldn’t be so bad if the chapters were around 5-10k words but with only 1-2k it is literally 300-500 words and a shift. It constantly breaks the immersion of the reader and the author could have easily dedicated a whole chaptee to the different POV’s instead of making this bothersome constant jumping between characters.

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Uzumaki of the Six Eyes

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