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Review Detail of TOFIE in The Power Of A Shadow Monarch! ; Multiversal Journey [CW: OPM]

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[ Review from Chapter 1] Honestly I can't be bothered with the review anymore. I went through a lot of things to say for this one, but It was too long. I think the main character deserved the bullying and his sister being harrassed and his father getting fired and my reasons for it is simple. It's a light consequence for the things he did through out the chapter. If many people on this story is here for solo leveling or world traveling my honest opinion. Don't read chapter 1. The system and the shadow monarch abilities are used by a fragile 16 year old kid with a deformed sense of justice. If the writer wasn't so focused on his over focused sob story about the bullies it would have been a good story, but this entire chapter is just info dump about a 16 year olds bland revenge for being a bully victim. My advice for the writer. You shouldn't overfocus on serious events, why talk about killing someone when you use murder and kill to explain an entire scene. That's the problem you explain like a news report but not show us what he did. Don't take it to heart. I like solo leveling, but I'm not interested in this 16 year old bullshit.

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The Power Of A Shadow Monarch! ; Multiversal Journey [CW: OPM]

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