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kurosky0
kurosky0Lv48mth
2024-08-13 01:25

other than MC have IQ of bucket full of stones and a disgusting human being the story development is not good cause the event's happens too fast without you even comprehending what happened and all character have zero awareness of themselves or around them make it feel like it's forced to show that MC is intelligent or smt. overall this story need to go slower and it's character should have a more personality than "big bazonga mom" or "the tsundere girl that only know two sentences" but I know you would delete this one too cause you can't criticism

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The first 3 arcs, until Chapter 41, are fun light chapters focused on building the world infrastructure in a quick and sketchy way. If you keep reading, you will see that after Chapter 71, I have solved most of the problems you criticize as much as I can.

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And if you write that last sentence in every review, it's normal for authors to delete your reviews.

kurosky0
kurosky0Lv4

1- I read until ch41 wish by my standard is enough to judge a story 2- the reason I write that in the last it's because the lack of any criticism for this story other than a one (wish is impossible and made me suspect you deleting negative comments) and you openly admitting for deleting them in that very only low stars comment

OLD_storage:And if you write that last sentence in every review, it's normal for authors to delete your reviews.
kurosky0
kurosky0Lv4

if you start your story in a "quick and sketchy" way you should expect a lot of people not liking it. this is a novel not a youtube short you could take your time pr at very least split the info dump into multiple parts inside multiple deferent chapters cause people WILL forget the info dump if you throw all at them and confuse them advance in the story but if it giving to the readers part by part they would be remind it of the old info and so not confused in much advanced chapters. look in the end it's your story and you can do whatever you want with it but don't expect everyone to agree with you or with a 70+ chapter for it to get good

OLD_storage:The first 3 arcs, until Chapter 41, are fun light chapters focused on building the world infrastructure in a quick and sketchy way. If you keep reading, you will see that after Chapter 71, I have solved most of the problems you criticize as much as I can.
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