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jaydon_simmons
jaydon_simmonsLv31yr
2024-05-09 08:34

I have enjoyed reading this. I wish it wasn't going to be a harem.

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OLD_storage
OLD_storageAuthor

I think I will remove the harem tag until it becomes a harem

SHADOW_FEVER
SHADOW_FEVERLv12

no bro keep it harem also if you wish you can add his mom in harem no problem front his side 🤣

OLD_storage:I think I will remove the harem tag until it becomes a harem
Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv15

don't take the harem tag off. people who dislike harem will just get mad when it does eventually turn into a harem. don't change the story because of a few people. most readers want this to be a harem.

OLD_storage:I think I will remove the harem tag until it becomes a harem
OLD_storage
OLD_storageAuthor

very sense

Malcolm_Massey:don't take the harem tag off. people who dislike harem will just get mad when it does eventually turn into a harem. don't change the story because of a few people. most readers want this to be a harem.
N_RR
N_RRLv4

Well, I really liked synopsis, but it seems it will be harem and I don't read them. . And yeah, you probably shouldn't remove the harem tag if you are planning to make one, even if it is in the future. I definitely would have gotten mad with that kind of development. Anyway good luck.

OLD_storage:very sense
OLD_storage
OLD_storageAuthor

thanks. good luck you too

N_RR:Well, I really liked synopsis, but it seems it will be harem and I don't read them. . And yeah, you probably shouldn't remove the harem tag if you are planning to make one, even if it is in the future. I definitely would have gotten mad with that kind of development. Anyway good luck.
RyuSenju
RyuSenjuLv13

I will read this depending on how many girls are in this harem. If it's more than 3, then I can't read this.

OLD_storage:thanks. good luck you too
SHADOW_FEVER_
SHADOW_FEVER_Lv10

yeah ses pretty good but don't remove harem also please try o add Natalia in it also😋

SHADOW_FEVER
SHADOW_FEVERLv12

most of the readers will like it to be a harem of course many of them came due to harem tag in addition to your writing skills so yeah,also don't leave Natalia behind😅

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