This is a good story to read, btw don't forget to check out the original tl and join their server (it's members are active and all of em are gender bender degenerates, I was also corrupted [img=nervous])

Eu adorei a história ela me envolveu até o final, tem um bom humor e personagens divertidos. A crítica que tenho dessa história e ela ter acabado de forma um pouco apressada, seria ótimo ter lido mais diálogos dos personagens e ter mais descrições de ambiente, personagens e criaturas.

is the translation of this novel is better than that one in novelupdate?

I can not describe how great this novel is man take my 5 stars and please keep up the amazing work i was worried the novel would end after they escaped but when i saw part 2 begins i got excited

Writing Quality: Overall, it's not bad. It's easy enough to read, atleast i think so. Though, one of the chapters kind of made me go "Hm..?" as i was reading whatever was being said, but the illustrations that were posted where this was originally tl'd from helped, atleast. Updating Stability: Well, it's not like it takes a long time, but you probably shouldn't expect a specific schedule for this, the tl has other stuff to do and other novels to be translated too. Story Development: Pretty nice. Comedy is obviously there. The chapter i call the transition to Part 2 of the novel to say is the most memorable development to me. Character Design: I don't have particularly anything bad i can say about it. It's nice. Most of the illustrations are without color, but it doesn't make it bad. World Background: Well.. it's alright. After.. well, the 'transformation' of Ella, theres certainly more of the world being explored. Im trying my best here to not include spoilers.