This is a good story to read, btw don't forget to check out the original tl and join their server (it's members are active and all of em are gender bender degenerates, I was also corrupted [img=nervous])

this story truly impressed my. it even gave me strong emotions like truly strong it was hard not to cry or being happy. when the Mary wish was full I'd I was happy and sad form her sory same dor the spider and the Clow. but the end gave me too much emotions don't take me wrong that nice but. the ending did not feel right to me like it's not a happy ending well it is but not at the same time. like a fake happy ending . it made me sad but also angry like why can't Alice being whit the children why do they need to be separated why do the children need to forget why why why!!! why can't they be happy together they where close friends really close so close that they are ready to put their live at sake! so why can't they be together! I feel power less it gave me the feeling that I need to change the ending I'm sad just sad I know it's a story but I hope that one day the children remember and one day Alice and the children chall reunite that one day thier will be a true happy ending at least in my opinion. I'm sorry If you feel offended by what I say about your ending author it just that I needed to let it out. but I truly hope that one day they remember and they reunite I hope it whit all my micht

Eu adorei a história ela me envolveu até o final, tem um bom humor e personagens divertidos. A crítica que tenho dessa história e ela ter acabado de forma um pouco apressada, seria ótimo ter lido mais diálogos dos personagens e ter mais descrições de ambiente, personagens e criaturas.

I can not describe how great this novel is man take my 5 stars and please keep up the amazing work i was worried the novel would end after they escaped but when i saw part 2 begins i got excited

Writing Quality: Overall, it's not bad. It's easy enough to read, atleast i think so. Though, one of the chapters kind of made me go "Hm..?" as i was reading whatever was being said, but the illustrations that were posted where this was originally tl'd from helped, atleast. Updating Stability: Well, it's not like it takes a long time, but you probably shouldn't expect a specific schedule for this, the tl has other stuff to do and other novels to be translated too. Story Development: Pretty nice. Comedy is obviously there. The chapter i call the transition to Part 2 of the novel to say is the most memorable development to me. Character Design: I don't have particularly anything bad i can say about it. It's nice. Most of the illustrations are without color, but it doesn't make it bad. World Background: Well.. it's alright. After.. well, the 'transformation' of Ella, theres certainly more of the world being explored. Im trying my best here to not include spoilers.