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Cozmic_Dragon
Cozmic_DragonLv21yr
2024-05-10 09:21

The translation is good enough to understand and read, but at times names are mixed up. This is being Updated pretty often. The story development is a solid 5, it is a very interesting story. Character design is alright, could be improved by spending a little more time on the main side-characters. World background is just btth, so if you know that than you are good to go. All together it is a pretty enjoyable read, and i hope this translator doesn't stop updating this.

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Daoist_Lake
Daoist_LakeLv4

Bro, its Harem or not? i hate btth with Harem (or many women)

Cozmic_Dragon
Cozmic_DragonLv2

Yes its harem, there are like 3 or 4 as of chapter 75 tho, so it doesn't seem to be that big.

Daoist_Lake:Bro, its Harem or not? i hate btth with Harem (or many women)
Daoist_Lake
Daoist_LakeLv4

Thank You. i just hope, MC don't steal all Xiao Yan's Women

Cozmic_Dragon:Yes its harem, there are like 3 or 4 as of chapter 75 tho, so it doesn't seem to be that big.
TrueImmortalDevil
TrueImmortalDevilLv6

somewhere around 75 the translation quality dropped

Cozmic_Dragon:Yes its harem, there are like 3 or 4 as of chapter 75 tho, so it doesn't seem to be that big.
Brandon_Hook
Brandon_HookLv13

did you continue reading because it doesnt seem like harem at all, the only "romance is between the mc and Gu Xun Er, i havent seem him make a move on little fairy doctor at all and she gets the most screentime after them

Cozmic_Dragon:Yes its harem, there are like 3 or 4 as of chapter 75 tho, so it doesn't seem to be that big.
Cozmic_Dragon
Cozmic_DragonLv2

Yea i continued reading, and he has not started dating anyone. Its just he has a group of like 5 or 6 women who adore him.

Brandon_Hook:did you continue reading because it doesnt seem like harem at all, the only "romance is between the mc and Gu Xun Er, i havent seem him make a move on little fairy doctor at all and she gets the most screentime after them
Brandon_Hook
Brandon_HookLv13

if you like other girls, she could ask if she isnt good enough for you, because she has one of if not the best talent in the whole series plus her huge background but you cant even hate her and call her spoilt because she has a good personally so she's like a perfect single female lead character, thats why harem with her will never be realistic

Cozmic_Dragon:Yea i continued reading, and he has not started dating anyone. Its just he has a group of like 5 or 6 women who adore him.
Vallandres
VallandresLv4

more than three hundred chapters and he hasn't dated anyone?

Cozmic_Dragon:Yea i continued reading, and he has not started dating anyone. Its just he has a group of like 5 or 6 women who adore him.
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Fernizer
FernizerLv14

Main problem is translation. It kinda varies, from barely readable to bad-mtl level, and considering that it is just that, and mtl that is not even properly proofread, I shouldn't expect too much. Honestly, if that was just tidied up a bit, some grammar here and there, names and cultivation levels, things like that, it would be more or less readable. The plot itself is not original and it is quite predictable. We get typical OP MC who gets everything he wants (if Xiao Yan needs something that MC wants/need then MC gets something better so Xiao Yan can still exist in the background... but here his existance makes some sense with the nature of the system). The system itself makes less sense to me with each story arc, as we get some 'rules' on which it operates, but it still feels too off to me as those rewards sometimes make no sense (like how devouring souls suddenly coincide with being able to see the whole continent from above? And how no one felt power capable of something like that?). Beyond that there is typical harem that gets basically all girls that Xiao Yan would get and then some (at least I think 'then some' from how story gets, but he at least gets Xiao Yan's girls). Basically no struggle for his powers, especially in later chapters, problems that should stump him for at least are just opportunity to show off... overall typical Chinese MC + Cultivation + Reincarnation + Golden Finger combo. Not that bad that you wouldn't be able to read it, but I can't recommend when you had more than 3 hours of sleep or just trying to wait for sleeping pills to finally completely kick in.

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