Review Detail of Allen_Clay012 in Dance with Fate

The story has a good start, its not boring. It had a good pace and the characters were relatable. I can tell they had distinct personalities as well... For the writing, the grammar was okay. I havent seen any mistakes so far. The dialogues and prose is easy to read and understand. I bet the MC theres a lot of surprise we see on the way. However, I got a feeling that a potential love story is starting already. I am going to follow this story for more. Keep on writing, you started the story good. It captivated me with the world building as well. I am interested to know how witches relate to the story. Thank you for introducing me this work. Do your best!