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Mert_Aga
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2024-11-22 03:30

Never ever read that shit. At the start MC was fun everything was unique (ignoring weak MC) later on mc became more dumb and dumb,finally for the sake of plot he gave most dangerous weapon he have. TO FATUI yes right just read 41/42. chapters to decide worth the read or not Im gonna lose my mind to many 5*reviews.Too much Korean Drama inspired. Potential wasted just don't read ıt will destroy u

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Argent_Evergarden1
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HONEST REVIEW!! First thing first I want to thank the author for bringing this amazing story to life. What I thought was a brain rot crack fic turned out to be genuinely one of my favorite stories I came across on this app. World/Charater development: the world is Genshin but where many would start at cannon with lumine/aither arriving and use already existing personality’s to create a plot the author started Years before cannon and beacuse of this was able to flesh out many character personality’s and make them feel as real as anyone else. Each person introduced feels alive with backstory’s that match there personality’s to the point where not once did it feel out of character even if it they are diffrent from cannon. My thoughts on the MC: I thought at first I was gonna have a hard time likeing a weak mc since I generally like strong/op mc’s but to my surprise from the start I couldn’t NOT like the mc. He was funny, likeable and smart about the way he did things. In the beginning he was immature and funny, then he became a reliable person who pranks others, and after that he became mature but still kept his mischievous nature and it didn’t feel overdone. I never once thought I didn’t like the mc and there were many times he surprised me. Even though the mc was weak he didn’t really feel like it, anything that he couldn’t beat with strenght he would outsmart and even if he couldn’t win he was never put in a truely disadvantageous situation where he couldn’t work his way around with a little help. The mc IS NOT A REINCARNATED PERSON! He is just a normal boy born with a unique ability that shaped who is was. And I loved it. Story development: Before starting the story the author warns people -Mc is Weak till around chapter 90+ -This is a crack fic/ Slice of life with little to no fights until chapter 90+ They didn’t lie it is genuinely like that till 90+ but it is not bad you barely notice how weak the mc is because he never lets himself be in a truely bad spot and if needed has backup from powerful people. From the start it is a crack fic like we were told and it never truely felt to be too much. The author mixed crack with plot so well that you are never bored with either. Even when you hit chapter 90 there are still crack moments you get to enjoy with the new action added into the story. This story never left me bored and always added new elements to keep the reader interested. The mc’s power while not strong at the start felt special and he never felt like a simple background character. Now 90+ he can use said ability to become a genuine threat to whoever tries him and I love it. The shift between weak to strong doesn’t feel unearned. Everytime he got a small power up it was either through his own effort or his sacrifice. OVERALL: I loved this story and I will wait as long as it takes for the author to continue. Genuinly my top 10 in this app.

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