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Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv45mth
2024-11-03 21:12

I gave it 5 ratings earlier but I changed my mind. The story is greatly marred by unnecessary cringey romance, which could've been kept for 2 chapters max. The budding rivalry between the siblings was making this novel interesting but the author wants to cater to Wattpad and AO3 sort of readers. The FL is not even well written tbh. If it was the guy instead of the girl who kept chasing despite getting rejected many times, the readers would be calling him a creep. The author has tried to make her a pure hearted Goddess but she's just an annoying side character who exists to drag the story. I think I'll drop this. The romance is just too cringey. I wish it didn't have Wattpad elements.

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brook_y
brook_yLv4

i know she is relly annoying , you can just skip those chapters whenever there is any interaction with ai . I am also doing that

brook_y
brook_yLv4

ok i take it back it is unbearable to read after 156

brook_y:i know she is relly annoying , you can just skip those chapters whenever there is any interaction with ai . I am also doing that
HaveANiceLife
HaveANiceLifeLv14

Incels lol

brook_y:ok i take it back it is unbearable to read after 156
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