Grammar is horrible, you probably took a Chinese novel did machine translation and copy pasted it just like that. -Third generation that it probably mean Third Hokage. -Gender of people all over the place overall -Speech all over the place too also Mizuki have like 9 different names on two chapters. And the cream on top is that you promote a Patreon… at least put some effort editing each chapter to make sense at least.
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