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Zerot_Solar4dPostedReview until chapter 11: The MC is stupid and a pussy that’s all in the story. Making your Character suffer for no reasons or random stupid reasons isn’t a character development. I don’t know if I’m suicidal or not, but I in that same situation would have used the gun to off the Ganger even if someone else kills me. I rather die killing a asshole than some random woman that have nothing to do with me.
- Zerot_Solar4dCommentedCh 11 Full Blooded
- Zerot_Solar7dReplied to Hanni_Baal
Can’t say, the most powerful in the Worm universe is just plain bullshit+ Spoiler: I mean Scion from Worm is just plain bullshit even on Warhammer 40k standars… I mean it, Scion can walk laterally on planes and destroy a sector of the multiverse Earth(because he was doing it canonically that’s the kinda power one just call bullshit).
- Zerot_Solar9dCommentedCh 26 Just for fun
- Zerot_Solar11dReplied to Yuusui
Hope this is just a typo I do hate Chinese fanfics, I can read a Chinese novel alright but fanfics is another thing altogether 🤣
"It's okay. My name is Rex. You can call me Little Rex. I did have an accident and relied on Tailow to get out of the forest." - Zerot_Solar14dReplied to AshlesSmiley
- Zerot_Solar21dPosted
20chapters and the story is just robotic, system that get people of others universes and make them slaves, thee story is just humiliating Issei with not actual plot… The MC don’t have a goal or a reason to exist, the System is the real MC and make this undesirable to read. Power ups are stupid an example is the Tori Tori no Mi and Mera Mera no Mi: MC ate both and that was unnecessary Tori Tori no Mi grant the user everything that the Mera Mera no Mi can do and more, eating the Mera Mera no Mi was really unnecessary he could have enchanted someone of his peerage or weapon with it.
- Zerot_Solar21dReplied to OG_DEADPOOL2002
Well Diochu could be a choice or Fou from fate Idk, even a guy will do just for variety and I’m not talking about harem, most powerful people on multiverse are guys. Just imagine having Dio on his team or Sukuna 🤣
Full of enthusiasm, Riser decided to seize the moment of luck and used the gold-level summoning card. Instantly, the room lit up with the summoning, revealing the majestic presence of Nana Shimura. - Zerot_Solar21dReplied to PageNotFound
Because devils created Caste System… Novility can’t lose reputation, Novility will never marry a plebeian without reason, etc…
Zeoticus retorted, "Your body is not just yours; it belongs to the Gremory House. You tarnished your image, offended the Phenex family, our partner for years. Now you have to face the consequences. You need to apologize publicly to Riser and the Phenex. Moreover, you will lose your position as the heir of the Gremory. This position will now be given to your nephew, Milicas." - Zerot_Solar21dReplied to W_D_3766
Is not, everything right here is political so far the Gregory have a Satan on their side. But I doubt the author know the implications, so far he doing pretty dumbs choices.
Lord Phenex, despite his surprise, responded with resigned understanding, "I understand, Lord Gremory. I know that Rias's actions do not reflect the intentions of your house. I accept your apologies." - Zerot_Solar21dCommented
The MC have no brain at all ok Tori Tori no Mi do what Mera Mera no mi do and more, why add the same kind of power again?
Eager to explore his new acquisitions, Riser retrieved the Mera Mera No Mi from the inventory. With a determined gesture, he consumed the Devil Fruit, immediately feeling the power of fire merging with his own existence. A flame appeared in his hand, and Riser realized he could not only unleash but also shape fire at his will. - Zerot_Solar21dReplied to Just_Jam
Why use something that will only give him the same power he already have?
2. **Mera Mera No Mi Devil Fruit** - Zerot_Solar21dReplied to Vee_Eternal
If I remember right Phenes on demonology ain’t actually Phoenix they are like them but again they aren’t phoenix…
3. **Tori Tori no Mi, Model: Phoenix (without weaknesses):** - Zerot_Solar22dCommented
Think carefully how you portray Alpha Stigma, yes the user understands magic at its core but it’s just theory for gaining a God Complex out of it they need to understand something more deep than Magic. Is a theory but to me those eyes work with anything and I mean ANYTHING, it was just few things the Alpha Stigma users did without magic that gave me that feeling on it. Thanks for the chapter!
Ch 42 Changing - Zerot_Solar22dReplied to Sakuta_01003
Legend of the Legendary Heroes, is kinda one of the broken abilities on anime like Misogi Kumagawa(Medaka Box) power “All Fiction”.
[Alpha Stigma (S-rank)] - Zerot_Solar23dPosted
Grammar is horrible, you probably took a Chinese novel did machine translation and copy pasted it just like that. -Third generation that it probably mean Third Hokage. -Gender of people all over the place overall -Speech all over the place too also Mizuki have like 9 different names on two chapters. And the cream on top is that you promote a Patreon… at least put some effort editing each chapter to make sense at least.
- Zerot_Solar24dPosted
Review from chapter 1-94 Grammar is bad, like seriously bad, at least throw this into a grammar checker, even today chatGPT can help you here. The story gets boring when he realizes people can get into his manga and he gains their power ups too. Everything after that chapter is just the MC showing off like an average Chinese cultivator protagonist, slapping others left and right and enemies yelling “you dare!”. So yes everything on the story is bland and insipid.
- Zerot_Solar25dReplied to Kono_Dio_na
As funny as this is, the pioneer is Kid Goku… he was a complete savage🤣
No sooner had she finished speaking than an extended fist landed on her face.