it's hard to understand what's going on in the story tbh, the writing is incomprehensible and illegible in my opinion, I Find myself guessing from paragraph to paragraph as to what is going on because the structure is so poor that the author cannot get his point across. I hope you rewrite your story when your writing abilities improve, thanks.

another garbage fanfic.....................

First why is this in the female lead section? Second I mean what is the point of revealing something like Rias actions if so little changes besides Asia dying. Which has implications I don’t like because of a certain someone. Third is this AU because if this is then it a pointless one because the changes that have happened so far are meaningless because the character growth is spotty.

Eyy i don't care about the grammar being not good as long as their is progress on that area I'm all good. Also hope you can continue this story.

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Can you start answering our questions about why your repeating chapters there has been 14 repeats in a row no one will read this if you can’t do your job properly

it was pretty good for a while but the last few chapters have just been rewrites so read if you want but the author definitely doesn't care because they aren't changing anything and just keep promoting their pa.treon super disappointed with how it went

holy shit reading the synopsis gave me an aneurism, I don't even know what the story is supposed to be from reading it. All the synopsis has told me is that the story will be illegible

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