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Abdul_Ayad
Abdul_AyadLv39mth
2024-07-29 00:03

It boring after the one piece part of the story and I think it just boring in general and hope that nobody waste time something so trash kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

One Piece: I'm Yamamoto Genryusai

FFAddict
3.2
152 Chs

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CocumberMonster
CocumberMonsterLv6

upto chapter 16. every chapter are toooooo stretch. it could be summarized as " he retired, got cheat, buster call on his hometown, and killed the celestial dragon. i hope next chapter will not be stretch to much. some sentences are repeated over and over. ot has good story just toooo stretch.

1yr

malhiharjot
malhiharjotLv3

Writer only have one good ability, one and only ability to brag about and stretch anything to make it long enough to made one chapter out one single line ,some time make two chapters from one single line. Last 10 or so should be one chapter and author Bragg and stretch them into 10 or many more chapters.

1yr
Leonz
LeonzLv6

Author ch 38 is wrong, control it because the content are for your Naruto fanfiction

1yr
dertyp2021
dertyp2021Lv3

This fanfic is just bad. Just imagine a machine translated fanfic, but about 10% better.

1yr
Max_Kaster
Max_KasterLv11

Ich finde die Idee gut ein starken Charakter in den teil der Geschichte wurden von one piece einzufügen. Aber die Umsetzung ist schlecht da die Geschichte nicht wirklich von dem hauptcharakter handelt sondern eher die Reaktion auf ihm, die dann auch mehrfach von allen möglichen Parteien wiederholt dargestellt wird weshalb die einzelnen Kapitel kaum Inhalt bieten die die Geschichte voranbringt. Daher erinnert mich die Geschichte stark an chinesischen KI stories.

1yr
Chris457
Chris457Lv4

The grammar is all over the place, as is the stories factual information. Nothing seems consistent with Canon details, e.g. baileys vs belli, colonel vs captain, sky gold vs heavenly gold. I like the premise of the story, however the incorrect details in the story from canon, without any forewarning or explanation has put me off. If this is a translation, the author should be noticing and fixing these issues, or getting a Beta reader to do it for them.

11mth
markwew
markwewLv4

source? what the source? Chinese title? ofj

1yr
VerzVerx
VerzVerxLv4

Excellent book! Can't wait for more... [img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]

1yr
Ssantos
SsantosLv13

Terrible translation, short chapters, many inconsistencies, no context, weak story (seriously? Chinese people can't make a strong protagonist without a system? Years of training to become a "colonel" navy...)

11mth
ShinigamiNoInochi
ShinigamiNoInochiLv4

Yamamoto alone can raze the whole one piece world

12mth
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