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Aydehan
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2024-04-06 03:41

Why harem? It would be great if he could pick up a beautiful woman from the universe and have a relationship with her. If you're not sure about a woman from the universe, you could very well create an original character yourself and use her. written with google translate.

Harry Potter. A Black Prodigy

Mr_Myeterious
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Mr_Myeterious
Mr_MyeteriousAuthor

Hmm because I and my readers wanted it. And about your fear that it might be more focused on harem or it will not fill like genuine, then I can assure you that relationship will develop throughout the story, not like mc proposed and all accepted.

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Orion_Ridge
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Mr_Myeterious:Hmm because I and my readers wanted it. And about your fear that it might be more focused on harem or it will not fill like genuine, then I can assure you that relationship will develop throughout the story, not like mc proposed and all accepted.
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Mr_Myeterious
Mr_MyeteriousAuthor

Well as an author I am giving 5 stars. But I want a honest review from you.

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Roger_Burgess
Roger_BurgessLv14

he went from nice kid to a psychopath getting addicted to a power complex

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erhemee1003
erhemee1003Lv4

so, he's a Black, not black? 馃檪

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Harume_V2
Harume_V2Lv4

The review is a bit low for now since you're just starting, but aside from a few things I like the way you write. The character hasn't been fleshed out so I'm not gonna critique that much same with the story, and now for the world background i suggest you play around with it to truly show your story

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Harsh_Raj_0438
Harsh_Raj_0438Lv1

Well starting is totally awesome. Not the best but definitely better.

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Yoshi_Yadav
Yoshi_YadavLv1

Amazing imagination and I am love this whole lot of story but everything feels so easy to our main character here...Wondering many facts about him. The story is really well. And I am giving this review only reading the story halfway - Just loving it

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Owler
OwlerLv4

Seeing as there aren't enough chapters to go off of, here's a 5 star review to show support. I will rate it accordingly later, after there are enough chapters.

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Iteq24_24
Iteq24_24Lv4

5 stars for now ,i really hope Dumbledore isn't evil

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