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Politician
PoliticianLv139mth
2024-07-24 07:42

The commentary absolutely ruins the Novel just do POVS and whats even more annoying is is that even in the commentary the words to describe feeling indirectly are just used again and again like this: Oliva said sadl: svgsgdhdhdhdhdhduduu. Hahshshgdgdhdhdhg: said Oliva said

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WBN2
WBN2Lv3

This only happened the first few chapters, literally read just a bit further

Politician
PoliticianLv13

I did and still do with the hope it gets better for now its just boring and bad written. Am ch 22, I think

WBN2:This only happened the first few chapters, literally read just a bit further
Politician
PoliticianLv13

* I am chapter 24

Politician:I did and still do with the hope it gets better for now its just boring and bad written. Am ch 22, I think
JustTiredOfPicking
JustTiredOfPickingLv11

is this a fanfic ?

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