the commentary part in novel ruined it for perfect 5 star. without that it would be more interesting. saying that "look in the camera" is just plain stupid.
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LIKEdo you remove the commentary further on ? because honestly it ruins the beginning of the story and many people would not pass 10 chapters if they see something they don't like at the start , The story is great so far and the mc is really enjoyable but the commentary section ruins the book for me
NunuXD:You have read less than 10 chapters right?
Same, the commentary ruined it for me. it breaks the flow of the story. It's like two completely different novel at the same time. one that tells the story of the MC while another is a tv show interview of all the characters.... POV would have more sense the commentary still exists to chapter 28
Jordzfml_7:do you remove the commentary further on ? because honestly it ruins the beginning of the story and many people would not pass 10 chapters if they see something they don't like at the start , The story is great so far and the mc is really enjoyable but the commentary section ruins the book for me