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Techno_GodLv37mth
2024-09-19 19:27

Not very interesting. This story doesn't seem to be about Raj. The other three seem to have more scenes than Raj who looks like a background character in his own story. When we finally get chapters about Raj it isn't him talking to girls, making advancements at work, it's all with a stupid motorcycle gang. Raj's whole new personality revolves around a motorcycle and it just doesn't seem like TBBT, more like sons of anarchy.

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Worldofimagination
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I understand where you're coming from. But like I said from the beginning, the fanfic isn't about Raj and the “friends,” each character will have their own part and individual scenes. And I do think I've written a lot of the dialogue and events around Raj. The last few chapters especially were literally all about Raj, and the chapters with the “idiot bikers” will serve to break away a bit from the original plot, and bring in some action (you’ll thank me for that later on). As for the girls, dude, we’re still at the beginning of the fanfic. If you watched the original series, you’d know that in the next chapter, a childhood friend of Raj would appear, and Missy Cooper (FML) shows up around episode 15 of the original. (We're on episode 8). That's why I didn’t add more female characters at the start, because from here on out it’s literally going to be all about that... You guys are stressing me out, seriously.

Techno_God
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Tbbt has so many characters in the plot I can't bring myself to care about some OC bikers and no, I don't read a tbbt fanfiction for the action so I don't think most people will thank you. He could have been friends with will, zack, kripke, and others at the job.

Worldofimagination:I understand where you're coming from. But like I said from the beginning, the fanfic isn't about Raj and the “friends,” each character will have their own part and individual scenes. And I do think I've written a lot of the dialogue and events around Raj. The last few chapters especially were literally all about Raj, and the chapters with the “idiot bikers” will serve to break away a bit from the original plot, and bring in some action (you’ll thank me for that later on). As for the girls, dude, we’re still at the beginning of the fanfic. If you watched the original series, you’d know that in the next chapter, a childhood friend of Raj would appear, and Missy Cooper (FML) shows up around episode 15 of the original. (We're on episode 8). That's why I didn’t add more female characters at the start, because from here on out it’s literally going to be all about that... You guys are stressing me out, seriously.
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