In the most recent chapter, 11. If you want Missy Cooper to be his girlfriend, you need make Raj taller, at least 5'10, as she is 5'9. I think the stories thus far are still enjoyable for me. However, regarding David's previous memories, perhaps you could write a chapter about his background so that we might learn more about him.
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LIKEThank you for the feedback, I’m glad you liked it, and about Raj’s height, I don’t think he’s short, he’s 5’7”. It seems like Missy is taller because of the high heels she wears, but the difference is minimal, so much so that with heels, she’s still shorter than Sheldon, who is 6’0.