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2024-09-10 08:18

In the most recent chapter, 11. If you want Missy Cooper to be his girlfriend, you need make Raj taller, at least 5'10, as she is 5'9. I think the stories thus far are still enjoyable for me. However, regarding David's previous memories, perhaps you could write a chapter about his background so that we might learn more about him.

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Thank you for the feedback, I’m glad you liked it, and about Raj’s height, I don’t think he’s short, he’s 5’7”. It seems like Missy is taller because of the high heels she wears, but the difference is minimal, so much so that with heels, she’s still shorter than Sheldon, who is 6’0.

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I did some research, the actress who plays Missy is 5'9 while the actor who plays Raj is 5'7. It's such a small difference that it can easily go unnoticed… and regarding the memories, I plan to do a bonus chapter with a glimpse of David's past later on.

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