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Dantes_inferno
Dantes_infernoLv1511mth
2024-04-30 06:13

It’s not a bad novel. The pace of this story is very slow if you consider the advance in time related to his abilities. Only some of his wives so far have been described by the looks, saying very beautiful is not getting 5 stars for character design. There hasn’t been anything about the world description outside of his home, landmass wise. The grammar is very good, the best part so far. All 3 rewards are dumb at his current level. Talisman making is Op but he has to level up his cultivation to use it to the max. Which he has very slow cultivation it’ll take a decade at least to get there maybe 100 years. Beauty refinement technique, useless. The talisman is powerful but is also requires higher cultivation, yes it can be used but at 10% power.

Starting as a Son-in-law to Establish an immortal Family

Heavenly Strings Painting Pillars
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1155 Chs

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Brian_Hughey
Brian_HugheyLv15

Nice slice of life, slow grind to immortality. Not the book to read if you are expecting a ton of action, I’m at chapter 73 and I believe there has only been two fights. One where he was ambushed and saved before he even entered qi refining and one where robbers attack him. He’s just a man seeking to spread his lineage and grow stronger as a result. Slow snow ball build. I just wish the chapters were longer or more each day as the slow pace of the story is made slower by the amount released. Hardly any translation errors, I think there have only been a few pronoun mix ups.

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Tetsuryuu01
Tetsuryuu01Lv15

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Noirsky
NoirskyLv5

Overall, I like this story. Not fully 5/5 star because there are problem with sentence structures and name. Firstly, the sentence structure is somewhat separated due to line by line structure which is not a problem to other but to me, it is seems imcompleted due a whole sentence separated into different sentences. And secondly, the name has some problem on title and name structure. I saw some name like Lu daoist, Lu brother and other similar structures give me mind hemorrhoids. Please fix it into this format for english speaking audiences: title(daoist, elder, etc) then name.

9mth
Ghostslayer381
Ghostslayer381Lv15

Overall the story is good and characters are decent but the translation annoys me because the third level of cultivation is core formation and fourth is nascent should and it keeps referencing core formation cultivators as nascent soul and it gets mixed up a ton in later chapters

2mth
ITGT
ITGTLv11

Excelente história pode parecer lento o avanço mas isso que torna especial. não é um avanço chato e corrido onde o personagem já fica op e não tem mais o que fazer. nessa historia ele leva a família dele junto com ele fazendo alguns membros da família bem forte. mostrando como realmente seria o crescimento de uma família forte igual nas novelas que estamos acostumados. vale muito a pena ler!

2mth
Aberto_Tempest
Aberto_TempestLv1

It is a masterful blend of intrigue and cultivation. Lu Changsheng’s journey from overlooked youth to an immortal patriarch is both compelling and immersive. The novel's rich world-building and unique Multitude Progeny System create a fresh take on the genre. As Lu Changsheng navigates family dynamics and cultivates his legacy, the story weaves an epic saga of resilience and ambition. Fans of "The Patriarch is Taking Concubine Again" will find this novel equally captivating, with its engaging plot and well-developed characters. Highly recommended for lovers of immortal cultivation tales!

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DaoistZenSama
DaoistZenSamaLv12

best novel, i love the way he doesn't abandon his loved ones, that's rare

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moistureman310
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Md_Vegito
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It is one of the best novel I ever readed.I really like this novel

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