Tbh I clicked on this as I like the character and idea, especially because it’s yuri. Main issue is that it’s just not my cup of tea as it’s a heavy system fic with massive progression. It’s not bad, and a lot of people will enjoy it, but I feel like it progresses way too quickly. The mc is getting really OP powers like no tomorrow, where instead there should be some chapters of her just building her current powers. The system is called street level system, but a lot of the people are super OP in their own rights. It’s good just too fast and OP for me.
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Liked it!
LIKEAs for “OP” she’s OP in martial arts, but in terms of DC (even Young Justice) she is incredibly weak. As not everything is the same as in canon Young Justice, so you might even see some…dangerous individuals appearing in the future. She also has been progressing her powers, but most of it is offscreen. After chapter 12, there’ll be a lot more of her progression and training (not that she really needs it).
I got one in the works but won’t be out for a month cuz I’m busy fin up college, will be updating fanfic and this account then
Javi_Craft:Please GaZe_Zero, more Black Diamond~