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GaZe_Zero
GaZe_ZeroLv21mth
2024-10-15 14:57

I think this is a great Rwby fic, but the one major issue I have is how ahead Ruby is portrayed. Even if she time traveled back in time by one year, she would just be an average student and not so far ahead, as in the actual show most of her time was spent catching up to current students. Also her combat style being as good as Pyrrha and overpowering Glynda is not possible following the Rwby timeline, and is just narrowly possible if it was volume 9 Ruby. Really author has buffed Ruby up too much, and instead of focusing more on plot and changing stuff through actions, they focus on powering Ruby up enough to deal with it.

RWBY : Ruby's Second chance

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This is my first ever review literally in my life and I’m glad that it’s on something this good, personally I love time loop stories especially if it loops multiple times but I have to say I got lost at some points but overall I loved this, binged it all with the only breaks being to sleep eat and use the restroom. I’d give it a 5 star if I knew if it will ever get updated again which is fair on this app considering my library is half full of really good stuff that got dropped in the middle or haven’t updated in several months/years but other than that amazing story.

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Usually, I don't write a review unless I really want to give my opinion about a story. I will be honest... despite the high score I gave this, I am dropping this. Sorry to say, author, that you lost me with the second time Ruby goes back... I mean, you lost me completely. The plot is becoming too complicated, and I don't like the direction it's going. I like everything up to the last chapter of Mount Glenn, and then you decided to make things convoluted. I will keep this in my library cause you mentioned that Ruby wakes up at some point, but until then... yeah... pity. Keep writing what you enjoy, but I'm out.

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